sobota, 24 marca 2012


Haiku Novine
Serbian Newspaper
Spring Summer 2012


faded grass—
redness of her nails
among his grey hair


Translation from English to Serbian: Sasa Vazic


fakult fű—
körmeinek vörossége
ösz hajában


16 komentarzy:

  1. __Such a scene... the redness of her nails, within his gray hair; that juxt... the faded grass, his gray hair. So very real! _m

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  2. __Such a scene... the redness of her nails, within his gray hair; that juxt... the faded grass, his gray hair. So very real! _m

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  3. Thank you Magyar; real and still vivid :)

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  4. " mourir
    la belle affaire
    mais vieillir "

    Bien cordialement. Mop.

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  5. Marcel

    merci beaucoup
    perverse et vrai :)
    mais très belle chanson
    et que sa voix :)

    Bien cordialement
    Irena

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  6. What a lovely juxtaposition of images. I like this post a lot...

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  7. Thank you Frank,
    nice to hear your opinion.
    Best regards.
    Irena

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  8. Eddie
    za gratulacje dziękuję :)
    Irena

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  9. I like this haiku very much. It's so romantic :-) I wonder if "through" can be used instead of "among"? I'd like to think that she is running her fingers through his grey hair. :-) Just wondering. :-)

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  10. By the way, I'd like to encourage you to write a spring haiku for this website http://prizepoem.com/ You might win a gift certificate from Amazon. I was the February winner last month. I received a 10 dollar gift certificate. Tell your friend about it. The contest ends at the end of the month.

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  11. This white-haired haiku writer says well done.

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  12. Dear Christine
    thank you for your suggestion. It is worth to be considered in the future.
    I appreciate your info on the contest. Congratulations for the certificate.
    Best regards
    Irena

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  13. Hi Bill
    your verse it terrific, I like it very much.
    Thank you
    Irena

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