niedziela, 23 września 2012






first day of autumn
she asks anew
my forename

premier jour d’automne
elle demande de nouveau
à mon prénom

pierwszy dzień jesieni
ona znowu pyta
o moje pierwsze imię

ősz első napja
ismét megkérdezi
keresztnevemet


8 komentarzy:

  1. Lovely photo and great haiku, Iris.

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  2. Thank you Marleen for your visit and nice comment. Have a good autumn Sunday :)

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  3. "first name" is much more common in English, Iris.

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    1. Hi Bill
      Your comments are always highly appreciated.
      I think British use the word "forename" more often than Americans however I cannot bet :)
      But "forename" appears here intentionally instead of "first name". The same concerns also to "anew" which I used instead of more common "again".
      I think the combination of autumn, anew, forname is appropriate for the subject of this haiku.
      Best regards and thank you for your remark.
      Iris

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  4. I suppose: the subject is dementia.
    Very good description in a haiku!
    And autumn fits to it.

    Best wishes
    Rudi

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    1. Hi Rudi
      thank you for your comment and for understanding my intention.
      Best regards
      Iris

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  5. Savez-vous que l'iris est l'emblème de la Région bruxelloise ?

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  6. Marcel
    Je vous remercie pour cette information.
    Je ne sais pas, mais je suis content et maintenant j'ai vérifié sur internet :)
    Je voudrais aller à Bruxelles en mai :)
    Amicalement
    Iris :)

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