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That falling (fallen?) leaf makes a haunting image in the context.
Hi Bill,I think actually each passing birthday day can be considered and a falling leaf. Unless we write about the past which is not suitable for haiku :)Have a nice week-end.Iris
Another neat thought, Iris. _m__I see the leaf gliding on the air, and when the door quickly opens its vacuum pulling that falling leaf -first- through the doorway.
Thank you, Magyar. You have a great imagination and the image you see is just the same as described in my haiku :)Have a nice week-end.Iris