Hi Bill, I think actually each passing birthday day can be considered and a falling leaf. Unless we write about the past which is not suitable for haiku :) Have a nice week-end. Iris
Another neat thought, Iris. _m __I see the leaf gliding on the air, and when the door quickly opens its vacuum pulling that falling leaf -first- through the doorway.
That falling (fallen?) leaf makes a haunting image in the context.
OdpowiedzUsuńHi Bill,
UsuńI think actually each passing birthday day can be considered and a falling leaf. Unless we write about the past which is not suitable for haiku :)
Have a nice week-end.
Iris
Another neat thought, Iris. _m
OdpowiedzUsuń__I see the leaf gliding on the air, and when the door quickly opens its vacuum pulling that falling leaf
-first- through the doorway.
Thank you, Magyar.
UsuńYou have a great imagination and the image you see is just the same as described in my haiku :)
Have a nice week-end.
Iris