The Asahi Shimbun
scent of birch
on our naked bodies …
cabin sauna
senteur de bouleau
sur nos corps nus …
cabane de sauna
zapach
brzozy
na naszych
nagich ciałach …
sauna
nyírfa illata
a meztelen testeinken ...
szauna
steamy
shower
her naked hand
on my back
her naked hand
on my back
(Bill)
relaxed
talk
through this rising steam
a molten rock
through this rising steam
a molten rock
(Magyar)
too
much of a good steam
cannot see your well boned body -
magyar smoke too
cannot see your well boned body -
magyar smoke too
(STOPS)
get
rid of smoking -
paradoxical senryu
let steam enter you
paradoxical senryu
let steam enter you
steamy shower
OdpowiedzUsuńher naked hand
on my back
(Which is, I know, an entirely different matter.)
Hi Bill :)
Usuńthank you very much for your exciting haiku :)
I like it very much :)
Have a nice day :)
Iris
Oj gorąco się zrobiło ... Gratulacje Iris
OdpowiedzUsuńDzięki Ci Robercie,
Usuńpolscy koledzy tak rzadko komentują :)
Pozdrawiam
Irena
relaxed talk
OdpowiedzUsuńthrough this rising steam
a molten rock
_m
Thank you Magyar for your fine haiku.
UsuńIt enriches my blog.
Best regards. Iris
too much of a good steam
OdpowiedzUsuńcannot see your well boned body -
magyar smoke too
Hi STOPS
Usuńthank you for your visit on my blog and for your intriguing haiku :)
Best regards
Iris
get rid of smoking -
OdpowiedzUsuńparadoxical senryu
let steam enter you
Thank you STOPS :)
Usuń