piątek, 31 stycznia 2014



WHA Haiga Contest

The 116th Contest (01/2014)






new year again
a boy mounts the horse
on carousel

nouvel an de plus
un garcon monte à cheval
sur le carrousel

znowu nowy rok
chłopiec dosiada konia
na karuzeli

ismét új év
fiú felül a lóra
körhintán


6 komentarzy:

  1. I think you need an article in line 3 of the English version. Good moment, in any case.

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    1. Hi Bill,
      Yes, I know that placing an article in line 3 is grammatically correct but is it indispensable? I was considering this while writing haiku because I had observed a lot of haiku without any article or just ommited some of them. Thus for me the whole haiku is more smooth and almost like a marry-go-round because there is no break for any article in the last line. Of course, this may be only my personal reception as English is not my mother language.
      Thank you for your comment.
      Best regards
      Iris

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    1. Eddie,
      dziękuję po raz kolejny :)
      Pozdrawiam
      Iris

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  3. Ahhh, that Merry-Go-Round; each new year... another ride!

    __Neat! _m

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  4. Dear Magyar
    thanks a lot for your perfect comment :)
    Best wishes
    Iris

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