I like this haiku very much. It's so romantic :-) I wonder if "through" can be used instead of "among"? I'd like to think that she is running her fingers through his grey hair. :-) Just wondering. :-)
By the way, I'd like to encourage you to write a spring haiku for this website http://prizepoem.com/ You might win a gift certificate from Amazon. I was the February winner last month. I received a 10 dollar gift certificate. Tell your friend about it. The contest ends at the end of the month.
Dear Christine thank you for your suggestion. It is worth to be considered in the future. I appreciate your info on the contest. Congratulations for the certificate. Best regards Irena
__Such a scene... the redness of her nails, within his gray hair; that juxt... the faded grass, his gray hair. So very real! _m
OdpowiedzUsuń__Such a scene... the redness of her nails, within his gray hair; that juxt... the faded grass, his gray hair. So very real! _m
OdpowiedzUsuńThank you Magyar; real and still vivid :)
OdpowiedzUsuń" mourir
OdpowiedzUsuńla belle affaire
mais vieillir "
Bien cordialement. Mop.
Marcel
OdpowiedzUsuńmerci beaucoup
perverse et vrai :)
mais très belle chanson
et que sa voix :)
Bien cordialement
Irena
What a lovely juxtaposition of images. I like this post a lot...
OdpowiedzUsuńThank you Frank,
OdpowiedzUsuńnice to hear your opinion.
Best regards.
Irena
Kapitalne hai
OdpowiedzUsuńK.
Gratulacje :)
OdpowiedzUsuńKarolu
OdpowiedzUsuńKapitalnie
Komentujesz
Eddie
OdpowiedzUsuńza gratulacje dziękuję :)
Irena
I like this haiku very much. It's so romantic :-) I wonder if "through" can be used instead of "among"? I'd like to think that she is running her fingers through his grey hair. :-) Just wondering. :-)
OdpowiedzUsuńBy the way, I'd like to encourage you to write a spring haiku for this website http://prizepoem.com/ You might win a gift certificate from Amazon. I was the February winner last month. I received a 10 dollar gift certificate. Tell your friend about it. The contest ends at the end of the month.
OdpowiedzUsuńThis white-haired haiku writer says well done.
OdpowiedzUsuńDear Christine
OdpowiedzUsuńthank you for your suggestion. It is worth to be considered in the future.
I appreciate your info on the contest. Congratulations for the certificate.
Best regards
Irena
Hi Bill
OdpowiedzUsuńyour verse it terrific, I like it very much.
Thank you
Irena