Chen-ou Liu published  my fourth haiku on his blog NeverEnding Story, in the Butterfly Dream section, with two Chinese translations and his comment.

http://neverendingstoryhaikutanka.blogspot.ca/2014/02/butterfly-dream-summer-rain-haiku-by.html#comment-form

summer rain

freeing stalks of grass

from her hair

Chinese Translation (Traditional)

夏雨

將草稈從她的頭髮

移走

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

夏雨

将草秆从她的头髮

移走