WHA Haiga
Contest
The 117th Contest (02/2014)
Comment
by Kuniharu Shimizu "Very nice photograph. Haiku, too”
on new year’s
day
I feed my
small daughter
her ponytail
le jour de l’an
je nourris ma
petite fille
sa queue de
cheval
pierwszy dzień roku
karmię moją córeczkę
jej krótki kucyk
újév napján
etetem
kislányomat
lófarkát
I'd put a dash or other punctuation at the end of line 2. Anyway, a charmer.
OdpowiedzUsuńHi Bill
Usuńthank you very much for your comment. I know there are different punctuations that haijins can put in haiku. My teacher says that there is no need to use any punctuation at the end of a line. Well, there are so many haiku schools even in Japan.
Best wishes
Iris
__I can only offer this, very nice haiga! _m
OdpowiedzUsuńHi Magyar
Usuńthank you very much for your comment.
Best wishes
Iris