środa, 26 lutego 2014



WHA Haiga Contest

The 117th Contest (02/2014)




 Comment by Kuniharu Shimizu "Very nice photograph. Haiku, too”



on new year’s day
I feed my small daughter
her ponytail

le jour de l’an
je nourris ma petite fille
sa queue de cheval

pierwszy dzień roku
karmię moją córeczkę
jej krótki kucyk

újév napján
etetem kislányomat
lófarkát


4 komentarze:

  1. I'd put a dash or other punctuation at the end of line 2. Anyway, a charmer.

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    1. Hi Bill
      thank you very much for your comment. I know there are different punctuations that haijins can put in haiku. My teacher says that there is no need to use any punctuation at the end of a line. Well, there are so many haiku schools even in Japan.
      Best wishes
      Iris

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  2. __I can only offer this, very nice haiga! _m

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    1. Hi Magyar
      thank you very much for your comment.
      Best wishes
      Iris

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